The Official Writing Challenge
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05/20/11
lovely poem i not sure how it fits clearly into the theme. there are one or to places where i would shift the words around a bit to improve the rhythm but that is because i am a fuss pot!!
love the title and the message and the tenderness made a smile on my face.
05/20/11
Beautiful poem. I wasn't sure how it followed the theme either, but I liked it very much.