The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, you did a great job covering a very difficult and infamous time in history. I thought it was very clever to line up the Bible verses with the timeline. My only suggestion would be to reference each chapter and verse as well as the translation you used. This must have been very difficult to write, but you did a great job with it.
Psalm 91. KJV
wonderful! i too loved the way you told the story using the bible verses as the events unfolded and personalised them to John. It really brought the whole experience alive.
I could see this as a short film with pictures/film clips of the events and verses together.... maybe worth exploring.
Powerfully written. I kept thinking how the Bible was given for us to use in any situation.

I really like how you wove the story and the Bible verses together. The only suggestion I would make is to reference the verses and the translation used at the end of each passage.
well done on placing third! you have some great stories to tell and i look forward to seeing more of them here :-)