The Official Writing Challenge
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12/02/10
What a beautiful poem, so well written, and full of great examples.
12/03/10
great poem it flows well and is full of great examples of non verbal language
12/03/10
A really sweet poem. So many good thoughts about body language. Nice work.
12/03/10
Very soothing poem and almost read like a lullaby.
12/03/10
I like this. It reads very smoothly, even for someone like me who doesn't always "get" poetry. :) Nice job.
12/03/10
Nice job on the poem!
12/03/10
Good job. I liked the progression of your poem. Keep writing.
12/04/10
I love it!
Perhaps you could add extra spacing after the rhyming set so it is easier to follow.

Great job! Keep it up!
12/04/10
You're a poet. Did you know it? -:) Love it. Great rhyming and a truly creative way to point out one of life's oft repeated truisms.
12/05/10
This is lovely. The flow and rhyme is perfect.
12/05/10
Great poem. Loved the pictures your writing brought to my mind. Keep Writing!
12/06/10
Beautiful poem. Nice message.
12/08/10
I enjoyed your poem very much. I was right on the topic and it was easy to read. Good flow.
12/09/10
Congratulations on your highly commended!
12/10/10
Wow! Thankyou for the wonderful feedback and encouragement on my first ever entry into the writing challenge!! Will have another go for sure! :)