The Official Writing Challenge
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08/01/09
I really liked the rhythm of your words and phrases and your story was engaging.
08/01/09
I like your lyrical style...a poetic
flow of words yet not a poem.
Very good.
08/02/09
Not easy to write in the lyrical way you have written this story, but nonetheless, you have done a very good job. A very unique way of writing and I liked it. Keep writing!