The Official Writing Challenge
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08/08/05
A true message. Note: use double spaces between paragraphs. Makes reading and thoughts easier to follow. Keep it up!
08/09/05
Yes, double spaces would be great. Otherwise, this was a WONDERFUL read. We can all relate to this - and I hope we all learn from it. Great work!
08/09/05
Very well written -and something we can all relate to!
Well-written and a great reminder of how we must not ignore our spiritual lives. Enjoyed the way you switched between present and past. Double spacing would certainly have made it easier to read but doesn't detract from the piece itself. Keep up the good work!
08/11/05
Despite your message, a week at the beach for me is a great clearing house. Divide your paragraghs with a space for readability.
I have felt this way before! Good entry
Ditto the paragraph spacing. Liked the way you framed this - standing at a crossroads as an opener...knowing the way to fix your dilemma at the end!