The Official Writing Challenge
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Nicely done! I liked the last verse the best. It was well done, the flow and style were good. ^_^
Nicely written and I enjoyed the flow. Great last stanza.
07/25/08
And thank God he did come for us, cuz -speaking for myself-I could not make it thru even one day hd He not.

God job, I liked the thoughts and the flow. It really spoke to me.