The Official Writing Challenge
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Reminds me of the scripture, rebellion is in the heart of the child, and the rod of correction drives it out. Though my earthly father did not model our Father in Heaven, our Heavenly Father knows how to drive the rebellion out with loving kindness and removing all the guilt and shame of our rebelliousness.
06/18/05
Your focus is in the right place. Keep writing, you have much to say.
06/18/05
A nice comparison and contrast piece.
06/19/05
From your writing you only say good things about your earthly Dad so I wonder why there is still a wedge between you. The scripture says to "Honor your Father and Mother so that your days may be long upon the earth. This is the first commandment with promise." You say so much in this story yet so much isn't said. You have the ability to fix it.