The Official Writing Challenge
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Great poem; it flows very well. I enjoyed seeing a couple of verses I recognize from the Bible, too. :) I can tell you put a lot of thought into this, and the result is something you can be very proud of!
08/16/07
A lovely poem. I like how you worked your way from not understanding and allowing bitterness in your heart to the point where your understanding of God's plan changes to acceptance of His will.
08/17/07
Beautiful poetry about a painful subject. Your entry reflects a journey through the pain of loss, and on into the hope for eternity. I'm glad your MC was able to turn back to the loving Father who can be the only one to offer peace in such circumstances.
08/18/07
This is a poem I wrote for my upcoming book, 'Hope from Heaven When Earth Loses a Child.' This book started when my cousin's children both died in 1999. I am just now focusing on completion for other families who have lost children by various means. We hope to address many of the questions and anger parents feel after the loss of a child. Go to www.hopefromheaven.com to view the website ministry. All proceeds from this book will be used in sponsoring Make A Wish Foundation children....Lucy