The Official Writing Challenge
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I aee a glimpse of a romance novel here. Good writing.
08/13/07
Your writing is worth praise! I honestly hung on your every word. The manner in which you told the story was replicate of the mounting anger, its plateau, and its fizzle. Great job!
A good lesson learned in this story. I enjoyed reading it. Often we try to blame someone else, when we know our problem is our own doing. Well written also. God Bless
08/17/07
I can invision a whole book from the beginnings of this story. And, a romance would be a good theme!