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TRUST JESUS TODAY
This is my first time to be critiqued on anything except my artwork... This poem is about just glorifying God, and His love.
I just want to glorify You,
I want to praise Your holy name,
I worship in spirit and in truth,
Like you thereís none the same.
Praise Jesus and God above,
For giving me this mercy,
Thank You, Father for your love,
Itís only You I want to seek.
You healed my heart and filled my soul,
With peace passing understanding,
Only you have made me whole,
Showing me all I can be.
If I delight myself in You,
My heartís desire I will receive,
My only desire it to serve You,
On You I rely, and I am free.
No worries for the future,
Youíll never leave or forsake me,
You see my thoughts and I canít hide,
I didnít understand but now I see.
You made the lame to walk, opened blind eyes too,
Itís my honor to know you,
The dumb speak and I see signs,
Signs that tell the world.
To tell the world that You are God,
And Youíre still living and well,
Is the greatest thing I can do,
To keep them from going to hell.
I hope they all accept you,
So they can walk that road,
The road to freedom and righteousness,
And Jesusí hand weíll hold.
So if you just ask him into your heart,
And let Him fill you up,
With mercy and with grace,
And the spirit of truth from up above.
Heíll welcome you with open arms,
As innocent as a dove,
If youíll repent of your sins,
Youíll find forgiveness and His love.
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