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TITLE: Somewhere 6/17/14
By Wesley Hesketh
06/17/14
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you use many things to try and find God, when all you need to do is close your eyes and He's here.
I’ve wandered all around,
most of the time I’m lost.
The sin in which I wallow,
is fun, but at a cost.

it makes me end up lonely,
most of the time, a fool.
All the things God’s given,
I’ve lost, yes every tool.

I sat at my friend’s house,
throwing questions about.
He said google the answer,
I ask what’ll that find out?

You see there’s a search engine,
not one that rides on a track.
You can get all your answers,
from eternity and back.

It’s something on the computer,
that helps you find your way.
It can lead you into righteousness,
it can teach you how to pray.

This may sound a story,
you might not think it’s true.
But if you have a computer,
you know what I'm going through.

I couldn’t feel God with google,
it seemed so empty and bare.
I feel him here, He holds me close,
now I know He cares.

I’ve figured out something,
if you google, God may not be found.
It’s only when you open your heart,
you’ll finally find Him around.

God truly loves this world,
He’s not out there in the lines.
Ask Him, He’s the answer,
He’s been here all the time.
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