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I missed the contest but this is on "time" I am in level 2 I just wanted to show how temporary time is for God IS EVERYWHERE.
Stepping out of time I find
God stands on heaven's stairs.
Helps me straighten out my mind
By showing that He cares.
When I do find something,
it catches me by surprise.
I find that beauty of my King
I see it in His eyes.
His smile lights up the world.
He's looking all around.
Forgiveness's flag's unfurled.
Standing me on holy ground.
He gathers me and holds me,
He shows me I'm alright.
Once again He helps me see
the Light in darkest night.
His forgiveness everlasting
it's one thing that I know.
With time that's ever passing
I find He loves me so.
The glow of Ever after –
I see it with my mind.
I hear God's joyous laughter
in the peacefulness I find.
Stepping back into our time
Something's making me aware.
It lifts me, makes me feel so fine,
'cause I find Him everywhere.
My prayers I lift up to Him:
love's what I'm asking for.
I knock and enter in;
He's opened up the door.
Righteousness He's given me.
He takes me everywhere.
Giving me eternity,
He lets me know He's there.
Time can mean so very much
it's something that God gives.
I'll get it with His loving touch,
No question that I'm His.
My Holy Father's so very real
and this I know is true.
You can tell Him how you feel.
'cause He has time for you.
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