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Birdie Courtright  |
11 Mar 2007 |
| This absolutely beautiful, Amy. I felt as though I had stepped right into this tranquil setting. Lovely.
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Chrissy Siggee |
28 Dec 2006 |
| I do love your art of poetry. You painted every stanza with realistic discriptions. Chrissy<><
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Linda Watson Owen |
01 Dec 2006 |
| Amy, I can't believe that I didn't comment on this poem earlier! The phone must have rung or something! LOL! This is one of my all time favorite poems. You have written with such skill and beauty using images that carry me away as I read. Absolutely wonderful! What a treasure this poem is!! Thank you for creating it.
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Brook Phelps |
22 Mar 2006 |
| Beautiful and stable with the continuous a,b,a,b rhythm and 8 syllable lines (although I did find 9 syllables in (counting spaces) lines 14 & 28). Thank you for sharing your work. May the Lord bless and keep you. My He shine His face upon you and give you peace. Best wishes.
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david grant |
03 Mar 2006 |
| Amy, this is wonderful.
Are you selling and getting published? You should be.
God bless you for this poem.
brotherdave
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Robin Parry |
11 Dec 2005 |
| *sigh* As I read, my computer screen faded away and instead I was sitting on a front porch in a rocking chair with a glass of lemonade enjoying the view of "evening coming of age." How beautiful. Please keep writing! God has given you a marvelous gift! Pure enjoyment! Thank you!
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Thom Mollohan |
30 Nov 2005 |
| Excellent! Beautiful!
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Phyllis Inniss |
28 Nov 2005 |
| What a beautiful poem. I too wish I could paint, but the words you use to describe the dusk gives the impression that you are a painter. If not with the brush, certainly with your words.
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Mary Lang |
28 Nov 2005 |
| What a breathtaking description of creation's subtle changes as it drifts into night. This is a poem I will re-read often. Thank you for sharing.
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Val Clark |
20 Nov 2005 |
| Beautifully done, Amy. An artistic eye and great word choices. Just love these lines: Then guide a swath of deepest blue/In which a tiny star would wink. Yeggy
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Karen Ward |
19 Nov 2005 |
| Painting with words Amy. Beautiful. I'm not usually into poetry, but I appreciated this. I especially like "At dusk, when evening comes of age" nice line!
:) Karen
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sheryl joy olaño |
18 Nov 2005 |
| Amy, you write extremely well and very much inspired. do you know how to paint? this poetry makes me sigh and think of good things.
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DeAnna Brooks |
18 Nov 2005 |
| What a breathtaking job you've done painting with your pen Creation’s blush upon the page. To see that peek of heaven yet to be my home ... what a blessing.
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