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TITLE: In the Cleft of the Rock | Previous Challenge Entry
By Laurie Kiel
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My life is in fragments
When will I feel whole?
Without a solution
I felt bereft
Of hope, there’s none left
So I rest in the cleft
of the Rock
Safe and secure
His love is the cure
For my woes
And so it goes
How long must I wait
Will my worries ever abate?
I look for help from earthly man
And find they can’t help
No one can
Of hope there’s none left
So I run to the cleft
in the Rock
I feel so hopeless
I feel so helpless
I cry out to my Lord
He is my adored
He is my comfort
He is my shield
To His love
I always yield
In His love I will abide
As again I hide
In the cleft of the Rock
My tears dry
As I no longer cry
Secure in His love
My worries I’ve left
Secure in the cleft
Of the Rock
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Only one suggestion, but it's a very slight one that might just be a personal preference.
In your 2nd stanza, your line, "Of hope, there’s none left". Using "there's" instead of "there is" seemed to break the rhythm / pattern you had already set for me the reader. But just a slight stumble.