The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/25
That ending stanza in your poem was a powerful message of how Jesus wants to give all the greatest gift of salvation.

People are always hiding what they feel
Sometimes it’s hard to know what is real

But the love in Jesus’ eyes
Is not a disguise

His love and His grace
Are written all over His face.

He is always transparent
I liked this a lot! Great job!
Poetry isn't my strong suit, but this made me smile and then put a lump in my throat. You did a great job of writing on topic and delivered a powerful message.
12/10/25
I liked the way you wrapped this up.
Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
12/11/25
Congratulations on your 6th place win, Laurie. Clever use of the word transparent.
12/12/25
Fun to read and with a purpose too! Love the ending!
12/12/25
Fun to read and with a purpose too! Love the ending!