The Official Writing Challenge
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This is lovely. I really liked how you used both topic words and delivered a powerful message.
11/28/25
Your beautiful poem does a great job of summing up the gospel message!
I general have trouble with poetry, but I didn't with this one. Well done at showing the rhythm and beauty of His love and grace.
You're one of the few people who make me like poetry! Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
12/13/25
Lovely poetic summary of the gospel! Praise the Lord for leaving Heaven so that He could win salvation for us so we could remain with and in Him!