The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed this story. You did a great job of developing the MC. Tiny note--be consistent about writing out numbers (all say up to ten, many say to a hundred, but consistency is most important). I think it's great to try and figure out what biblical characters might have thought. It gives us great insight. Well done.
06/16/25
I love stories that bring biblical characters to life. I have never heard one from the point of Lazarus. You’re did a great job of bringing the moment to life. Very descriptive. I enjoyed it. Great job.
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