The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a beautiful poem. I can feel the pain, passion, and love in each line.
05/27/25
Beautiful poem such a beautiful tapestry of words s d emotions. you moved my heart with your words well done.
I admire the patience, strength and humility demonstrated in ‘this weak child’.
Well written.
05/29/25
Congratulations on fourth place!
07/11/25
I really like the simplicity of these words. Your sparseness allows us to read into it and connect deeply in many aspects. I love the reflective pauses.