The Official Writing Challenge
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Thank you for your great insight on this topic. It was an enjoyable read that made me do some thinking.
This is an interesting piece. I felt a little disconnected from opening to the River; it felt a bit sudden to me with more of a transition or circling back to it at the end. I do think you did a great job of writing on topic. Your ending really touched my heart and spoke volumes.