The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely prayer. It reminds me of the Prayer of St Francis (Make me a Channel of your Peace). You nailed the topic and delivered a powerful message.
Your poem is lovely and reminds us of many attributes of God's love. It expresses your hope to be with Him forever, and I share the longing. Great job!
04/23/25
A lovely poem that reads like a prayer. It made me think, reflect and pause.