The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked how you brought a less known definition of the topic word. I didn't know this definition until I looked up the word for the topic. I also enjoyed the MC's name. I was sure in the end he was going to go back to the fountain and toss the tanner in (where the coins gathered helped homeless or some other charity). I think you nailed the topic in a fresh way and delivered a powerful message.
04/12/25
I like the simple homespun wisdom in this story, almost as much as I admire how your title very subtle reworks the title of one of Jane Austen's popular stories - "S(ixp)ense and Sensibility." Very subtly - not at all Austentatiously...
04/16/25
Nicely done. I liked the name of the character as it gave it a bit of a humorous, yet serious feel. Good lesson.
04/17/25
Congrats on your placement.
This was beautiful writing.
God Bless~