The Official Writing Challenge
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10/10/24
What great analogies within this poem for being powerless when not connected to Him. Great job and message.
Truth. Thanks for the reminder
Blessings
10/12/24
Your poem has a powerful message that we are powerless without him. :) It flows really well and gives a lot to think about. May God bless you and your writing.
I really enjoyed this, and that's a high compliment from me as poetry isn't my favorite genre, but it flowed nicely and it made me think to connect the meaning, which is always great and the ending was sensational.