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This is a powerful piece. You made me think about the topic in a different way, which is always good. You definitely have a point and a clear message.
You did a beautiful job pulling the reader into your poem with your opening two verses – well done. I also liked your follow up in verses three and four (stanza one), as well as your explanation of true persecution in the remaining stanzas.
09/06/24
Wow! Just wow! This is so powerful and relavant. I love it.
09/07/24
I like this piece very much. It makes a powerful point. Self examination is very important when we think we’re being persecuted.Good job.