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07/25/24
Uncertain Seas is creative. I enjoyed how you had John Mark and Barnabas away from others on the ship and how Barnabas displayed meekness and encouraged John. Meekness is a strength. You showed how Barnabas had confidence in John Mark.

Your story was crafted well. I liked how John started out on the coil of rope and after their discussion he returned to it certainly to ponder.

Uncertain Seas held my interest from beginning to end.

Thank you for your story.
What a charming story. You pulled me in right away and held me to the very head. It was easy to envision.
Good storytelling - and a great example to pull from scripture to display meek.
Blessings
Congratulations!