The Official Writing Challenge
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06/11/24
Good job! You kept me guessing, as to how ‘honor’ applied to your story.

I really enjoyed this story. You made a clear point. I get this might be set in a different time, but the dialog felt a bit stiff and formal. I enjoyed the sudden appearance of the frog. It's a nice surprise and really demonstrates your message.
lovely story, surprise ending!