The Official Writing Challenge
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06/01/24
What an event to witness in person. You portrayed the scene well. And I liked how you wrapped it up. Such an appropriate charge.
This is so lovely from beginning to end. You nailed the topic and delivered a clear Christian message. I could feel the pain of the MC. You did an excellent job of showing her agony.
06/04/24
Excellent! Again, you are right on topic. I love your monologues!