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08/05/23
Great writing and good job with the topic.

God BLess~
This is an interesting take on topic. I found it an entertaining read. I wish at least one older woman understood in a different way. My grandmother born 1913), mother (1935), and several aunts and uncles all had young unplanned pregnancies, as did I(1965, but my difference being raised in 80s was I wasn't forced into what would have been a horrific marriage. Mom lucked out. Grandma had it really rough, although that was never talked about either). It was my goal to stop that cycle and now that my 30 yo daughter is married I am so happy to say that statistic is broken. It took lots of honest conversations with all my kids, much like I could imagine these ladies having. You did a great job of writing on topic and I enjoyed your character's. It is so vital to have calm, rational conversations to help us see how and why others feel the way they do. This article is a great start.
08/10/23
Linda,
A phenomenal piece of writing, congratulations!

God Bless~