The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/23
A good message and a good reminder. Good job.
This is a nice message. I liked the beginning. It pulled me in to read the story from a different POV. I did have trouble following parts of the beginning. It was hard to know who was speaking. If you use body language to help show who is speaking, it'll paint more of a picture to the reader. The idea of buying without money is intriguing and thought-provoking.
Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!