The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a stunning piece that really spoke to my heart. I enjoyed the repetition. It fit perfectly and moved the message along. You did a great job of making both words a central part of the piece.
01/15/23
This is a great poem. Excellent use of the topic words and I loved the repetition.
This is great. It was a delight to pick up the rhythm and join in. I have a feeling I'll be singing 'I'm allowed to say it aloud' quite often today :).