The Official Writing Challenge
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This is an interesting story. I enjoyed the characters and the message. I assumed the friend was Muslim, but wasn't positive, although I was fairly sure because of the Saudi Arabia mention, but it might be good to mention it just in case others like me might not know for certain. I was also curious about the differences in the teachings. I know you don't have room in this word limit for details of how the Qur'an's version differs from the Bible's. But it seems like this is potentially written for a longer story, so that might be something you'd want to add. I could easily see these characters in a novel! You did a nice job of pulling in the topic while delivering a clear Christian message.
Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!