The Official Writing Challenge
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I could taste, smell and feel your experience on the beach because it's so much like my own. You gave your entry a sense that "God is in His heaven and all is right with the world." (Thank you, Robert Browning, for your poem "Pippa Passes.") I could have painted a picture of your campsite on the beach from your lovely description. Well done!
I enjoyed reading about your summer camp and beach experience. You have such a good description style, you take your reader along on your travels. This one makes for good memories.