The Official Writing Challenge
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I don’t enjoy, nor do I know anything about poetry. That being said, I thought this poem was fun to read with an impactful message. So that’s saying a lot! Good luck. Well done.
03/18/22
A poem of hope. Thanks for sharing.
I found this full of strong truth and multiple spiritual concepts packed into entertaining lines. Good use of your word count!
03/19/22
The truths of your rhyme stand the tests of time. Great rhymes and great truths. Well done and clever title.
03/19/22
I'm not a big poetry person, however, sometimes I really appreciate the "message" and beauty of the words, and this is one of those times. I truly enjoyed reading your entry.

It held truth, conviction, little bit of humor, and intrinsic thinking, well done.

Thanks for sharing this with us.

God bless~
This is an outstanding poem--such a clever use of rhythm and rhyme, special word placement, and most of all, wonderful truths. First place for me!
03/21/22
The lines which caught me the most were:
God opens up the vast
Resources of his grace
To give us more space.

So our hurts need not to be nursed,
Or rehearsed,
They can actually be reversed.

It reminds me of a time I heard a prior prostitute exclaim, "Now that I have Jesus in my life, I rejoice. Because He has made me PURE."

I agree with Verna. It's a beautifully written poem. First place, for sure.
This is quite profound and spoke to my heart. I could relate to it much more than I might want to admit. Congratulations on ranking 15th overall. Happy Dance!