The Official Writing Challenge
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You set a great scene when the reader can smell the coffee and taste the doughnuts. Your characters are relatable, and the pastor's wise counsel is solid.
This was so tenderly written, so full of compassion that I'm left wondering if you were the pastor in the story. The leader of the flock is expected to have all the answers in every field; psychiatry, medicine, human relations, parenting, education, spirituality, and on and on ad infinitum. This particular pas-tor's approach was on target, a model for those who are called upon to solve all the world's problems. God bless all of these servants of God (and you).
02/17/22
Nice character development and a beautiful use of the theme. A good example of how we can reach out to people broken by bad memories. Congratulations on the EC.
Congratulations!
Congratulations on your EC Noel. If I'm understanding the rules correctly😂. I affirm your message.
You really brought the characters to life and pulled me into the story. And although I can't relate exactly, I certainly can relate on another level and I expect we all can. Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!