The Official Writing Challenge
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I like it!!
02/03/22
The repetition of the first stanza is the perfect ending. Well done! Congratulations on your EC.
This is beautiful. I could feel the passion and love in each word. Congratulations on your EC. Happy Dance!
I read this and thought, "I can see this as a Hallmark bookmark, with praying hands or a picture of Jesus praying." Your meter and rhyming were perfect and it flowed as beautifully and gently as a cool mountain stream.

This is a keeper for sure!