The Official Writing Challenge
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10/21/21
Thank you for Second Chances.

This is a great story. Great description of Elizabeth. You painted a clear picture of her with her clothes, car, and $100.00 tip.

Elizabeth looks in her backyard and notices the people there can use the assistance to improve themselves. Those that receive the help can pass it on and the people better themselves and the area.

I believe leaving the big tip came from her heart. She realizes it begins with her.
10/22/21
What a beautiful story! I felt the hearts of both women and the excitement and humility of obedience to the Holy Spirit's leading. Nicely done!
10/24/21
You painted great ‘pictures’ of your characters.