The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/21
I enjoyed this fresh perspective of Sarah from her point of view. I especially loved the poetic way you phrased your last paragraph. Good job.
I really enjoyed this. You brought Sarah's story to life. It flowed so nicely. Congratulations on ranking 15 overall. Happy Dance!
You got into Sarah's head. Fun to read....