The Official Writing Challenge
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07/08/21
Oh my goodness - this is excellent! A winner for sure. You had me chuckling all the way through!
This I LOVE. I can see that little mischief maker so plainly. I laughed the hardest at the communion wine. Wonderful story!
07/14/21
Oh, funny. I could picture this as the story unfolded. Well done.
Oh I just love this story. I could see Jimmy guest-appearing with Wrigley and Camden. I smiled the whole way through. Congratulations on ranking 18th overall. Happy Dance!
07/21/21
What a hoot! This kid reminds me of my grandson! Chuckled and snickered and thought, “Oh no!” throughout the read.
Easy style and carried along well. Loved it!
07/21/21
What a hoot! This kid reminds me of my grandson! Chuckled and snickered and thought, “Oh no!” throughout the read.
Easy style and carried along well. Loved it!
07/22/21
Jimmy sounds like the quintessential mischievous rascal, akin to Arlo in the movie "Old Yeller!" There is something about a mischievous boy that tugs at my heartstrings. This little "Dennis the Menace" had me laughing through the whole piece!