The Official Writing Challenge
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05/24/21
What a great take on the topic. Nicely done.
05/25/21
Wow!
Loved this part:


"For those who follow in our path,
With need to show the way
That leads them to the love of God
As He did in that day."

Excellent job,
Blessings~
Funny, I was going to also say the last verse was a winner! You nailed it with that closing. Great job!!
05/25/21
Great cadence and content leading us down a path of truth and hope.
05/26/21
Very well done!
This flows so beautifully. I could almost hear it in a song. Congratulations on your EC! Happy Dance!
Author's Correction--Last stanza, second line, first word: "we" instead of "with."