The Official Writing Challenge
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04/22/21
Very descriptive and compelling writing.
I really enjoyed this. You pulled me in with the conflict right away and the suspense held my interest to the very end.
Our ladies' Bible study just studied the passage about the midwives, Shiphrah and Puah. I wish I could have shared this story with them.
04/29/21
Excellent. Loved the way you set the scene in the opening paragraph.