The Official Writing Challenge
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02/25/21
I like this very much. I kept waiting for more but like how you ended it.
02/26/21
I loved your story. I love how the Lord speaks to us so clearly through Scripture.
This is a powerful piece. The main way to master sin is to hand control to God, but boy is that hard to do. You have a strong message with subtle humor that I enjoyed. Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance!