The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/20
Overall I think this showing rendition of Woman at the Well is interesting and well done, however, I counted three POV shifts (head hopping)through this one article. Should only have one per scene.
12/12/20
You brought this well-known story to life!
12/13/20
I enjoyed this imaginative expansion of the Gospel incident, especially what you say about the sudden and total transformation (perhaps incomprehensible to others) that can result from experiencing forgiveness. Thank you!
12/16/20
I enjoyed this story, especially your description of her heartache of rejection and shame. I could feel her pain vividly.
You brought this to life. You did an excellent job of getting into the MC's head and giving her depth, which isn't easy to do in only 750 words. Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!