The Official Writing Challenge
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08/27/20
I could feel the emotion in this piece, and I was relieved by the ending. What a nice take on the topic. Well done.
I'm completely in awe at he perfection of this poem--in style, in emotion, and in inspiration. What a wonderful "take" on "feather." I can't see how another could top this as number 1!
08/27/20
So poignant. Good writing. God bless.
08/28/20
Wow! Hope this places high.
08/28/20
Beautiful!



Blessings~
08/30/20
I've been there. It is an eerie place. Your poem bings it home.
08/30/20
Movingly and skilfully expressed. Thank you for this evocative story in a poem.
08/30/20
Powerful! Thank you for your effort.
Congratulations on ranking 12 overall. Happy Dance. This is such a powerful and beautiful piece. It left a lump in my throat.