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12/06/19
Interesting analogy. Not sure where this fits the topic.
12/08/19
Beautiful poem of joy and hope
I enjoyed this so much I read it through slowly twice. It speaks so lovingly of Christ willingly giving up His life, no turning back, so we could be with the Trinity in heaven forever.

I checked Collins dictionary regarding this idiom and found this: "'Jump in with both feet definition': to enter into an activity or venture wholeheartedly."

That describes the Seed in your poem perfectly. At any point in His journey, He could have changed His mind, and turned away, but He chose to follow His father's mandate all the way through. Praise His name forever!

Well done, indeed!
12/12/19
There's no greater example of jumping in with both feet than Jesus! What a lovely reminder of that in this poem.
This is a powerful poem that tells the most incredible story ever. Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!