The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/19
Powerful use of word imagery.
I am always in awe of those who write poetry and the powerful images they create. This is no exception. The end reminded me of "Footprints in the Sand".
This is a touching poetic piece. It paints a vivid picture in my mind and gives me a tiny snapshot of how life like this must be.
06/08/19
Wow! Goosebumps! You really expressed the deep pain. Well done!
Love this - thanks so much for sharing!
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