The Official Writing Challenge
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Perfect rhythm, lovely rhyme. He is the answer to our questions, for sure.
06/07/19
Beautiful and well said!
This is great, not only in content but in every other way that separates great poetry from fair poetry. Your finger-tapping test of rhythm was perfect as was your rhyming. Very good job!

This just flows so lovely. It touches my heart and fills it with hope. This is a powerful message that will touch people in many different ways.
06/08/19
My favorite line is the last one, "And stumble not nor fall." It is so reassuring. What a lovely poem - it just made me feel so peaceful.
Congratulations on ranking 11th overall. Happy Dance!