The Official Writing Challenge
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Good attention keeping story. Very realistic in our broken world.
03/06/17
I really like this. I thought Billy was going to blow his cover and defend him to his dad, but your way works much better.
03/08/17
Great job showing character growth and changed perspectives. I like how it ended. ☺
I really enjoyed this...well done!
Congratulations on ranking 19 overall. Happy Dance!