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Good story.
02/28/17
A wonderful story of healing of the heart, even though the body was dying. Nice job.
This is a great story of how God uses our pain to help others. I do believe medicine is also a gift from God, and while nutrition and other basic methods might work for some, God is still the power behind those who get better with more traditional methods. I liked the conflict in your story. The ending was good too. The pacing was spot on. Congratulations on ranking 14 overall. Happy Dance!