The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/17
Well told. You capture the fear and stealth of a totalitarian regime well. I like the way you used the topic - a time when a slip of a tongue could spell dire consequences.
Wow this is a stunning story. You do a wonderful job of developing the characters and delivering such a powerful message. Congratulations on ranking 16 overall. Happy Dance!