The Official Writing Challenge
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01/22/17
Powerful!

I really enjoyed this read.

M. C.
01/24/17
Well done. I'd love to read the continuing saga.
An excellent piece of writing. Keep up the good work.
01/25/17
Very good message in your story, and well written. I liked it very much.
01/26/17
Congrats Gary on your win. Very creative.
Congratulations! Really well done with this one.
01/29/17
Chillingly well written and as you do with all your entries, you take the topic and apply it to seemingly futuristic societal concerns too readily in the present.
02/01/17
Congratulations, Gary, for your 4th place win this week.

Thank you for giving a voice to the voiceless.