The Official Writing Challenge
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01/20/17
Interesting reminder of the history of the Church and the price our brothers and sister's paid (and pay), for their faith. I enjoyed reading and learning from the good writing.
01/23/17
I enjoyed this very much. I felt the chill of the elements (so much so i pulled a blanket up around me) & was touched by the determination & bravery of the MC. I was engaged from beginning to end.
01/24/17
Great take on the topic. I love the true reality of the message.
You have brought forth a good piece of writing. Keep up the good work.
Congratulations, Kayla! Well done.
01/29/17
Fantastic story - your line 'the union of rotting ice and dark water' was a stunning description and memorable word picture.
01/30/17
Congratulations Kayla. This is beautifully and movingly written. I like the way you used baptism as the branding and showed the powerful implications of being branded a 'heretic'/Christian.